Write in your own voice

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I recently noticed the ‘grabber’ or ‘bribe’ on my site isn’t in my own voice. It’s an honest and fair trade – give me your email, and let’s have a consultation. The problem is that it’s not in my voice. I don’t talk like this:

“start with your FREE consultation”

I talk like this :

“I want to help you create a brand and website you love. Let’s chat and see if we’re a good fit”

We get used to seeing salesy copy across the web and it comes naturally to say things like ” FREE! ” and ” I’ll show you how” but is that how you REALLY talk?

I heard someone call it the Friend Filter before. Talk as if you’re talking to your friends. Its way more genuine and authentic and your audience will appreciate it.

BREEZIE CASTELL MARKETING

BRAINS AND BEAUTY SINCE 2011

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